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Re: [APML] Petition-2nd draft



Bert K is a technical writer and sent me a really good version of mine. I will combine the 2, add some hard facts- greenback talk and 120 requests per Bobby and repost soon. Meantime, thanks for the support.
 
 Start thinking about whether a snail mail delivery with a real 8x10 (after being cleared by phone/email) would be more effectice than email. If so, would we present just email addresses as signatures or full info like telephones and addresses too?
 
Also, I would use Rick Bright's site to collect many of the Japanese, int'l guys and people who are not currently APMLers- pretty much everyone's on there. If you're not, send him a note!  There's also Astromart Forums. Any help with these matters after we agree on a final version is appreciated.
 
WK
-----Original Message-----
From: Ulrich Beinert <analemma@gmx.de>
To: astro-photo@seds.org <astro-photo@seds.org>
Date: Monday, January 21, 2002 4:13 PM
Subject: AW: [APML] Petition-2nd draft

I think this new version is great. I agree that the tone may need to be a *bit* more formal, but definitely not too technical - we want to touch these people's souls!
 
If necessary, I would commit myself to buying large quantities of film, too, mainly E200 and some TP as well. I'd say I'd go with the $200, and count me in for signing!
 
Ulrich
-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht-----
Von: owner-astro-photo@seds.org [mailto:owner-astro-photo@seds.org]Im Auftrag von Warren Keller
Gesendet: Montag, 21. Januar 2002 05:59
An: apml
Betreff: [APML] Petition-2nd draft

Here's an edited version getting to our specific appeal quicker while cutting down on some superfluous metaphor.