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AW: [APML] Petition-2nd draft



I think this new version is great. I agree that the tone may need to be a *bit* more formal, but definitely not too technical - we want to touch these people's souls!
 
If necessary, I would commit myself to buying large quantities of film, too, mainly E200 and some TP as well. I'd say I'd go with the $200, and count me in for signing!
 
Ulrich
-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht-----
Von: owner-astro-photo@seds.org [mailto:owner-astro-photo@seds.org]Im Auftrag von Warren Keller
Gesendet: Montag, 21. Januar 2002 05:59
An: apml
Betreff: [APML] Petition-2nd draft

Here's an edited version getting to our specific appeal quicker while cutting down on some superfluous metaphor.